10A-Elevator Pitch No.1


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  1. UnknownOctober 6, 2017 at 12:24 PM

    Hi Ciara, you did such a good job with your elevator pitch. You sounded confident and natural! Also, i've mentioned before that your idea is good and I would like to have a service like that myself.

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  2. UnknownOctober 6, 2017 at 3:55 PM

    You did an excellent job with your elevator pitch! Like Amanda said, you seem confident and very collected which makes the pitch flow naturally, which is not an easy thing to do. Your idea is great as well and I think that if it were to eventually become a reality it would help out a lot of people. I know that I would love a service like this because I hate the doctor's office and I would love to make my time there as short as possible!

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  3. UnknownOctober 8, 2017 at 2:55 PM

    You’re elevator pitch was great! The idea would be so helpful because this happens to me all the time. I never get to finish filling out the papers before they call me in and it’s always very repetitive. It would also be very helpful to the elderly because they always forget what they take so if they were to have this app, all they need to do is show it to the physicians. The only problem I see is that there will need to be a disclaimer on each form so that medical offices don’t not get in trouble with the law or that patients agree not to copy or print these papers without consent of the office.

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