22A- Elevator Pitch No.3

Feedback: On my last pitch I received good feedback on how well I had improved. I was told that I was more relaxed and I sounded more professional. I was most surprised to hear how relaxed I looked even though I was actually nervous. What I changed was that I wanted to give more details about my application and be more confident. I realized that the key to a good elevator pitch was confidence and good content. People will be more interested if you are animated and are passionate. I still do not think this elevator pitch is perfect but I am proud to say that I am more confident in making one.

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  1. UnknownNovember 11, 2017 at 8:22 PM

    I think you responded really well to your feedback and made the necessary changes. I actually felt the same way too, I thought I looked as relaxed as I did considering that I was pretty nervous. However, your right, the more confidence you show in your speech the more willing people will be to listen to your pitch and ultimately invest or support your venture.

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  2. UnknownNovember 12, 2017 at 9:29 PM

    I think your elevator pitch was very good. You point out all the important information needed to know about your app. You definitely give more details about the app. I think this idea is great for the medical field. This app will definitely help many families and individuals all around the world. After watching the first pitch, I think you improved a lot based on the feedback you received.

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  3. UnknownNovember 12, 2017 at 11:08 PM

    Hi Ciara, I think you have improved a lot from your previous elevator pitches.You seem very comfortable and you're speaking at a good pace. Like I mentioned before, I like your product and I think you did a great job presenting it.

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